Bexva™ comic book page in progress redraw

Now that I'm done with all the major pencilling of the pages of the first comic, I'm going back and redrawing anything that stands out to me that I don't like. This page is early in the story and one of the pages that really bothered me. The "before" drawing was so bad, but only months ago I thought it was really awesome, heh. Well this one should be a million times better.